Case+Study+First+Draft

=Collaboration Case Study= =First Draft= =Partners: Ballinger and Kirkland= Traci here is my first draft. Only about one and a half pages, and no conclusion yet. Please read and tweak to your liking. I will check back tommorrow so we can finalize and follow our plan of being ready to submit on Thursday evening. Call if you need me for anything. Garra Hey Garra, Great job on the first draft!!!! I went in and made some comments in word then added a few things. I made all of my writing in red (since the comment bubbles were blue I thought that would be easiest to follow if I wrote in red). Feel free to take out anything that I added, I just tried to include a few more things here and there. One part I thought we were lack a little was talking about administratos and since they are specifically listed on the rubric I tried to put in a paragraph that delt specifically with them. Then I tried to write a short conclusion paragraph as well. We spilled over to a third page but just a little so I think it should be fine. Please look over and revise it one more time then I think it shoudl be ready for our final submission. Feel free to text or call me tonight after you have looked over it. I hope all that I did makes sense and works well. GREAT job on this assignment by the way. I feel like we both got in there and really did some good efficient work! It's always nice to have a great partner to "collaborate" with!!! ;0) Traci

Hi Traci! The paper looks great!!!! I think it all flows well and definitely provides readers with insight on the benefits of collaboration for all stakeholders. I think all we have left is adding the WORKS CITED page. We need to verify the requirements of font, font size, and spacing as well. I remember reading this somewhere on the WIKI. I proofread the what you added and also went ahead and fixed those sentences to the better wording you suggested. I will check on the MLA requirements and add the WORKS CITED and then we can both check over one more time tommorrow evening before we add to the FINAL DRAFT page and submit.Thanks SO much for being so easy to work with! Garra Ok. So I finally saw the WORKS CITED! Lond day yesterday! Sorry! I did add Empowering Learners. Not sure about the one that is in Mcgregor too? I am good with whatever you think. I am sure it is fine to leave it. Talk to you later! Garra